Wow, Mathew. I have never thought of looking at it in such a way as you did. I also didn’t discover some of the things that you did, about Mr. Freire, such as that he spent 70 days in a military co-op for being a traitor. One word of advice, would be to try and be a little more detailed with your thoughts. They are so good; I guess I just want to hear more.
Westley, you do great work, but it seems short. You get the point across but there isn’t that little extra that excited the reader, and get them engaged. Don’t get me wrong, you have great points, and great ideas of what Mr. Freire was trying to accomplish, but they are just unfinished. Keep up the good work, and try to write more next time.
Freire’s Ideas pertain to the ideals of this class, by teaching the ways of the Caribbean, the ideals that most people that live there abide by, and to show us that every child weather they live in the US or the Caribbean needs to be literate, and educated.
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